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Chaos Looming (The Legion of Pneumos, Book 1) (Paperback)

Chaos Looming (The Legion of Pneumos, Book 1) (Paperback)

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The Legion of Pneumos • Book 1

Build More Than You Break. Heal More Than You Destroy.

"But what if chaos can't be tamed?"

Over a year has passed since Keira Altman died in a car crash and woke up in Loren—a world where breath is power and ancient orders guard deadly secrets. She's mastered her pneumonancy. She's earned her place among the Legion.

But the chaos she's meant to control might be the very thing that destroys everything she's come to care about.

The Training is Over. The Real Fight Begins.

The peaceful initiation Keira hoped for shatters the moment she joins Gaius Flavius's cohort. Their mission: retrieve Prince Landry from rebel forces threatening to tear the uplands apart. It should be simple. It should be safe.

It's neither.

When a routine recovery mission explodes into political betrayal, Keira discovers that the Legion's wisdom comes with hidden agendas. The Bellatorio's justice is built on occupied lands. And the line between protecting the innocent and enforcing oppression is thinner than she ever imagined.

In a world where every institution is corrupt and every choice has consequences, how do you decide what's right?

Nothing Is What It Seems

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Political Powder Keg
Rebel forces. Bellatori occupation. Legion neutrality. When all three collide, Keira's caught in the crossfire—and neutrality isn't an option.
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Impossible Choices
Follow orders or follow conscience. Trust the Legion's wisdom or trust her instincts. Save the mission or save innocent lives. Every choice has a cost.
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Chaotic Power
Keira's pneumonancy is growing stronger—and more dangerous. The chaos she wields could heal... or destroy. Learning to control it might be the only thing that saves her.
Deadly Secrets
Someone in the Legion is lying. Someone in the Bellatorio is playing both sides. And when the betrayal is revealed, the death toll will be devastating.

What You'll Experience

A Morally Complex Heroine

Keira isn't chosen. She isn't special. She's just a girl trying to do the right thing in a world where "right" isn't always clear. Watch her navigate impossible politics, witness brutal consequences, and forge her own moral code when all the rules fail her.

Breath-Based Magic with Real Costs

Every whistle. Every bind. Every act of healing or destruction drains pneuma from the world—and from Keira herself. The magic system isn't flashy spectacle. It's tactical, costly, and deadly when wielded wrong.

Romance That Doesn't Eclipse the Plot

Danny is Keira's grounder—the anchor that keeps her tethered when pneumonancy threatens to pull her under. Their bond deepens through shared danger and impossible choices, not instalove or forced proximity. Trust is earned, not given.

Political Intrigue Without Easy Answers

The Legion claims neutrality but enforces Bellatori law. The Bellatorio brings order but through occupation. Rebels fight for freedom but use brutal tactics. No faction is purely good or evil—and Keira must navigate them all.

Military Realism Meets Epic Fantasy

Written by a physician and veteran, Chaos Looming grounds its fantasy in authentic tactical thinking, realistic injury consequences, and the moral weight of violence. Combat has stakes. Death has meaning. Victory comes with scars.

Characters Who Fail, Struggle, and Grow

Keira makes mistakes. Danny keeps secrets. Gaius Flavius—their commander—wrestles with duty versus conscience. Sara, Lyssa, Elliott, Nazor: every character feels real because they're flawed, fighting, and trying to be better.

The Story

Their goal is simple: retrieve Prince Landry and return him safely to the capital. Keira's earned her place in Commander Gaius Flavius's cohort. She's ready to prove herself.

But nothing about this mission is simple.

The rebels aren't faceless enemies—they're farmers and mothers fighting centuries of Marian occupation. Prince Landry isn't the leader his people need—he's a sheltered royal who's never confronted what his family's rule actually costs. And the Legion's neutrality? It's a comfortable lie when you're enforcing the empire's laws on occupied land.

As ambushes turn deadly and political betrayal surfaces from within the cohort itself, Keira faces the question that will define everything: What do you do when every institution you serve is corrupt, and every choice you make has blood on it?

Through it all, Danny is her anchor. The grounder who keeps her tethered when pneumonancy threatens to pull her under. Their bond deepens with every impossible choice, every moment they choose trust when trust feels dangerous.

Until the capital erupts. Until the chaos she's meant to control breaks loose in the streets. Until someone she loves pays the ultimate price for a war they didn't start.

And when it's over, nothing will ever be the same.

Perfect For Readers Who Love:

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Portal fantasy that asks "what if going home isn't an option?"
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Political intrigue like Leigh Bardugo's Shadow and Bone
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Morally gray heroines like Victoria Aveyard's Mare Barrow
Magic systems like Brandon Sanderson's—structured, costly, tactical
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Slow-burn romance that deepens through shared trauma and trust
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Worldbuilding as rich as Tolkien, pacing as tight as Hunger Games
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Fantasy that treats violence, injury, and death with gravity
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Stories that ask hard questions about power, duty, and justice

What Readers Are Saying

★★★★★
"Great, packed with action! Loved the intensity and the characters are very easy to enjoy. Well written and very intriguing. Hoping to see more of these characters in the future. Definitely recommend it!"
— Tina, Goodreads Reviewer
★★★★★
"This book sucked me in from the beginning. Keira follows her gut which infuriates many around her. This book shows how following your gut can lead to great things but also some loses. Danny is like Keira’s conscience; sometimes getting upset at Keira’s actions, but always sticking by her regardless what happens. My only hope is that we see more of Danny and Keira together in the next book of this series!"
— Rebecca, Goodreads Reviewer
★★★★★
"This book absolutely nails the pacing and tension you'd expect in a YA Fantasy novel. The plot hooks you in early on and slowly lays on the mystery in the opening chapters until things finally come to a head, at exactly the right time. I found myself easily turning the pages, eager to see what would happen next, and often surprised by how much time had passed when I set the book down."
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Sarah Foil, YA Fantasy Writer and Reviewer
★★★★★
"Author H.B. Reneau has crafted a compelling opening to a fantasy series which does a fantastic job at introducing us to the world and the characters, whilst also providing this first very satisfying adventure. Reneau's vivid descriptive work and atmospheric text pay off as a brilliant and immersive set-up for the novel's future action in this highly creative fantasy world."
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About H.B. Reneau

H.B. Reneau is a physician and military veteran who brings authentic tactical thinking and medical realism to epic fantasy. Her background in emergency medicine and military service informs every aspect of her worldbuilding—from the logistics of occupation to the brutal reality of combat injuries to the moral weight of impossible choices.

The Legion of Pneumos series explores power, responsibility, and the courage it takes to challenge corrupt institutions when you're part of them. It's fantasy for thoughtful readers who crave complexity, consequences, and characters brave enough to question everything.

Where This Fits in the Series

New to the Legion of Pneumos? Start with The Cantor (Book 0.5) for Keira's arrival in Loren, or jump straight into Chaos Looming. Both work as entry points!

The Cantor (0.5)
Chaos Looming (1)
Haven Enduring (2)

Character Origins (read after Book 2, before Book 3)

The Centus
Gaius's origin
The Rebel
Neval's origin
The Remnant
Sara's mystery
Book 3 (Fall 2026)

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The Chaos Won't Wait. Neither Should You.

Political betrayal. Impossible choices. A magic system with real consequences.
Begin the journey thousands of readers can't stop talking about.

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